Web Design Goodies Critique #17
Published January 11, 2001 By Joe Burns, Ph. D.
Greetings, Fellow Designers
Hey buddy…wanna buy a condo? I’m writing this critique the same day my mother and father will arrive in their new Florida condo. After 30 years in Cleveland, Ohio, the Burns parents are picking up and moving to the sunshine state. While going through my list of possible critique sites, I ran across the Destin Condo Search page by Isabel Smith Art & Design Studio.
It seemed like fate…let’s take a look.
Now the obligatory release statement…
>>>>The critique below represents the opinions of Joe Burns, Ph.D. Feel free to disagree with, argue about, forget, or accept anything he writes. The purpose of the critique is to offer examples that you may use to revise your site, or forget when it comes to your own Web site. As always, remember that there are simply no hard and fast rules to Web design. Any choice is the correct choice as long as that choice aids the user and fulfills the sites purpose for being.<<<<

Concern #1: The home page is sleek, and the navigation is easy to figure out. I also like the rollover image that goes from a ball to an arrow. I just think the page is dull. Theres a lot of white space…probably too much.
Suggestion: In e-business, your home page is your storefront. Stopping into a home page is a lot like window-shopping. You are a realtor. Use that white space to give the reader a good bang. On the right side of the links, put the Deal of the Week. or The Most Expensive One We Have, or something to that end. Dont laugh at that expensive statement. I wrote commercial copy for a long time and price sells especially a high price. Im serious.
All that aside the home page is not being used at all. Its little more than a list of links. Give me a deal right then and there. Give me the one thats been marked down or just went up on the market. Sell me one right off the bat.